Scurvy (N.)
1. (pathology) A disease caused by insufficient intake of vitamin C leading to the formation of livid spots on the skin, spongy gums, loosening of the teeth and bleeding into the skin and from almost all mucous membranes.
Antiscorbutic (Adj.)
1. (medicine) preventing or curing scurvy
Citrus! (Comic)
1. (humour) A farcical fantasy comic, updating on Wednesdays, dealing with the fight against Scurvy by four Antiscorbutic teens and their friends.
14 Nov 2007 02:00 am
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Author's Comments:
DawnBluewings,
Yes, I am a perfectionist.
I know I'm being nitpicky....but pay attention to Lemon's skin tone from page 1-23. Notice the changes. Lan and Nil, too, though not quite as much. I think you might be overdoing the satin effect or whatever 'tis in photoshop, too. (E.g. panel 2, Lemon's neck.) |
Huh...
Nil reminds me a little bit of Severus Snape in the third panel. He reminded me MUCH MORE of Severus Snape before Lady Meip pointed out what was wrong with the lineart.