31 Dec 2008 02:00 am
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Author's Comments:
DawnBluewings,
Crazy-ass angles in the first and last panels especially. I like how you use darkness with the... council, I guess, but when he's beamed out of consciousness I think maybe you could have made it a bit more clear about what was happening. In all, great page. You're coming along so well. I'm very proud of you, honey. |

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